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The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.

The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
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The first chart which shows the results of a survey of 100,000 people asking if they
traveled
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 abroad and why they
traveled
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 for the period 1994-98 and the
second
 chart which shows their destinations, it shows clearly that throughout the 5
years
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 most of the people
traveled
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 abroad for holidays mainly to Western Europe. The rest of the sample asked in
this
 survey their answers varied
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about why they have
traveled
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 abroad, business was the most common answer after holidays, followed by visiting friends and families but the order of these answers did not change through the 5 years of the survey. The main destinations did not
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 vary Western Europe remained the most visited region abroad followed by other areas and the least visited region was North America.
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summary, most people by UK residents travel abroad for holidays and their main destination is Western Europe.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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