University students should pay the full cost of their studies because university education benefits individuals rather than society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
College students suggested billing the education cost fully since that just can affect them rather than bring them back to citizens. In my opinion, I decidedly disagree with that statement and I will describe my reasons.
The purpose of education is to give a right to all humankind, particularly the right to get a
scholarship
. Not all people
can purchase an expensive university since there are many scholarships the government provides for people
. Hopefully, the scholarship
mentee can bring back any contribution to society and the country. For instance
, when I was an undergraduate student, I used a scholarship
from the banking industry hence
I must have contributed to their activity. That means the scholarship
does not focus on the personal but what our contribution later in the social community.
There are some social job that needs an academic requirement such
as teachers and lecturers. Those jobs need a university degree which after graduation they can bring back to society. Sometimes, some students are interested in gaining that kind of job, but they do have not sufficient money to pay because of that, there is the utilize of waiver fee. For example
, many people
have a genius but are unable to pay the university fees hence
they need a loan to continue their dreams. That is
evidence that some people
have a dream of being teachers or lecturers but can not achieve it.
In conclusion, why I disagree with this
statement caused of two reasons which are the right to get a scholarship
and the high dream of getting an academic job. The government must consider scholarships, especially for potential students who want to achieve their dreams in society.Submitted by damayanti.nsd on
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