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immigration has become very useful these days what is your opinion about it

#immigration
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Each year, millions of people around the world decide
tobimmigrate
 to other countries because of their own reasons.The most common reasons are: Educational purposes, job and business opportunities, marriage, to offer more opportunities to their children, financial issues, and to escape from their past. My decision about immigrating will follow
frok
a giver or sender
from
 not being able to find a good job
,
Accept space
,
poverty
,
Accept space
,
politics
,
Accept space
,
governmental issues
,
Accept space
,
and financial problems.The
cheif
most important element
chief
 reasons making me more determined is economic instability and lack of improvement.Most of the countries are
wlaking
close enough to be walked to
walking
in
Suggestion
on
 the right path, they have been trying for many years to improve and have changed their policies.
That is
 why they are called developed countries.

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