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some people think that the role of teachers will soon be replaced by technology. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the question of whether
technology
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 will dominate the field of education has been widely debated.
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 some contend that teachers will remain the core of teaching, I firmly believe that
technology
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 will take over the roles of human teachers, and the reasons will be thoroughly explained as follows.
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 with, advances in
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 have made it possible for millions of
students
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 to learn remotely. With technological devices,
students
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 across the globe can access various learning materials without needing to attend school, allowing numerous individuals the opportunity to study.
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, the emergence of online learning has provided disadvantaged groups, including rural dwellers, low-income people, and disabled individuals, with virtual classes that overcome geographical barriers and offer affordable tuition.
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, broader and more equal access to information can be achieved through technological
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 rather than human teachers who can only be present in a physical class with a limited number of
students
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.
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,
technology
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 has transformed the way people learn, as it offers personalised learning. Identifying the pace and time required for each student can be obtained through artificial intelligence
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, maximising deep comprehension, which is probably impossible even for a skilled educator who is responsible for more than twenty learners at the same time.
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, most language-learning applications use AI-powered
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 to adjust the difficulty levels based on the user's performance, which has been proven not only to improve learning acquisition but
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 to encourage learners to continue pursuing their goals.
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, AI
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 can teach countless individuals simultaneously and provide each one of them with a distinct method, unlike human educators, who are often forced to teach several people using a single approach.
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,
although
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 human tutors have certain merits, I am convinced that technological
tools
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 are more effective.
Students
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 can access learning materials and benefit from customised learning with their technological devices.

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task
State your view early in the first sentence and give a short plan of the points you will make.
content
Show balance by adding some limits or a counter idea about the use of tech and the role of teachers.
evidence
Use more real and simple examples to back each point, with a bit of clear detail.
language
Keep sentences short and clear; use common words to keep easy reading.
content
Clear stance on the topic.
structure
Good use of linking words to show order (To begin with, Furthermore, For instance, Therefore).
structure
Well planned with introduction, body and conclusion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • tools
  • learn
  • learning
  • class
  • lesson
  • teacher
  • student
  • job
  • work
  • replace
  • change
  • future
  • plan
  • design
  • blend
  • balance
  • support
  • help
  • care
  • feel
  • trust
  • motivate
  • explain
  • show
  • answer
  • question
  • task
  • pace
  • access
  • cost
  • time
  • effect
  • benefit
  • risk
  • ethics
  • safe
  • right
  • wrong
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