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Some people do not believe in paying taxes. Do You agree or disagree?

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The governments all over the world have a taxation
system
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, even though, many people find it as wastage of their hard earned
money
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. I firmly believe that it is true and reasons for the same are discussed in
this
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 essay. One of the main reasons, why people hate to pay taxes, is that when they compare the facilities provided by the governments to
the the
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the
 amount deducted from their pockets, they find it unreasonable.
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, working people paying their taxes on time year after
year but
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year, but
 they barely get to see any improvement in the poorly organized local transportation
system
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, the government hospitals or schools.
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, gradually they
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
 their trust in
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 practice of pick-pocketing their
money
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. If they get charged so much, they wish to use better facilities or they will keep cursing the
system
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.
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, when it comes to taxes, it is not that they are only paying yearly taxes on what they earn but they need to pay extra charges on grocery
shooping
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
, toll taxes
etcetra
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.
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, they feel cheated by their own governments. New York Times published an article stating that in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
 people pay state and centre taxes on
purchase
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the purchase
 of every single item
.
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.
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, they end up paying double tax on their shopping. Resultantly, many of them try to avoid paying taxes either by choosing
cash payment
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a cash payment
 for their shopping or
tranfering
transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferring
money
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 through black markets. In conclusion, if countries can justify their spending of
money
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 garnered
throug
from beginning to end
through
 taxes and bring a unified tax
system
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 to keep everyone under
same umbrella
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the same umbrella
,
then
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 only public will feel comfortable in paying taxes.
Otherwise
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, in
current scenario
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the current scenario
, it is purely looting of public
money
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.

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