Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other thinks is has disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

These days there are many companies which advertise their products/services by backing
sport
teams and players. It is argued by someone that it is a good idea for advertising goods and products, while many other people contend that there are many disadvantages with it. In my opinion, it is certainly true to say that there are
both
advantages and disadvantages whit
this
notion but the benefits are more outstanding. On the
one
hand, advertising is
one
of the most important ways for companies to
intruduce
cause to come to know personally
introduce
their products and supporting
sport
events is the best
way
for advertising, because many people are more interested in the sports than in the
sponsers'
assume sponsorship of
sponsors
advertising massages. And
also
, in
this
way
sport
teams and players are given free equipment that they could not afford
otherwise
. Cristiano Ronaldo in
advertisement
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the advertisement
of Clear shampoo
brand
could be
good example
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a good example
for
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of
this
notion. Indeed, around three years ago I didn't know
any thing
an indefinite thing
anything
about
this
brand
, fortunately I saw an advertisement of
this
brand
of shampoo that by
one
of the most famous
footballists
(
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(
Cristiano Ronaldo)
had been advertised
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had been advertising
it on his Instagram official page, so that advert lead
to
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until
I changed my hair-washer from that time. Ultimately backing
sport
teams and players is
good
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a good way
way
for companies to advertise their
brand
and goods, it
also
has a
finicial
involving financial matters
financial
benefits
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benefit
for
sport
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sporting
teams and players.
On the other hand
,
this
kind of advertising might have bad affection
both
for companies and
sport
teams. Some companies advertise products harmful to health and it definitely will have a negative
cosequences
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequence
on
sport
team. And
also
, a player who does drugs or misbehaves will have vice versa consequences for the company.
For instance
,
one
of the Iranian banks had supported a cyclist in World Tour games. After a while discovered that the cyclist did drug for the match, that certainly
whould
past tense of "will"
would
should
be a negative affection on
this
bank's client.
Thus
, backing
sport
events,
also
could have some disadvantages for
both
companies and
sport
teams. To sum up,
although
advertising by
sport
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sporting
teams and players is
one
of the best
way
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ways
for companies, it
also have
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also has
many drawbacks that will have vice versa consequences for
both
companies and
sport
teams.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sports sponsorship
  • financial support
  • athletes
  • brand visibility
  • awareness
  • commercialization
  • integrity
  • dependencies
  • corporate funds
  • unethical practices
  • strategic partnerships
  • communal relations
  • promote healthy lifestyles
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