Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
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Conclusion
Now a days
, Suggestion
Nowadays
technology
is occupying a larger part in our life
than ever. Day
after another, technological advancement has enhanced the Suggestion
A day
The day
life
of all comunity
members than ever, not to a group of people living in a particular local area
community
metion
the daily make reference to
mention
announcment
of new a formal public statement
announcement
announcements
cure
that has been discovered by new methodologies depend on a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine
car
tehcnological
solutions. What can I say without hesitation, New based in scientific and industrial progress
technological
technology
has offered humankind what they did not deam
of through their a series of mental images and emotions occurring during sleep
dream
existance
on the earth.
Scientist day after another, produce new products to remove the state or fact of existing
existence
obsticles
in front of human something immaterial that stands in the way and must be circumvented or surmounted
obstacles
walfare which
reached stages in the Accept comma addition
welfare, which
welfare which
warfare which
last
decade that has not made durring
the previous history of the man on the earth.
Starting from the revolution of communications which allowed all the way through
during
any one
over the earth to reach another whatever their locations by voice or even any person
anyone
life
as it they are in front of each other. You can blindly shoose
any field of pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
choose
life
to see a dramatical
change that the suitable to or characteristic of drama
dramatic
technology
revolution has changed rabidly
in the with rapid movements
rapidly
last
decade .
Transportations as an essential field of Accept space
.
life
has noticed a significant upgrade in the last
decade, after one was using the petrol trains which were slow and make lots of noise, low confort
to passengers, with annoying vibrations a state of being relaxed and feeling no pain
comfort
durring
the trip, and all the way through
during
pullotion
to the nature, now the electric trains can move dramatically faster with tons of undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
confort
features away from the vocal and air a state of being relaxed and feeling no pain
comfort
pullotion
.
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
to
sum up, Suggestion
To
technology
advancment
turned the human encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
advancement
advancements
life
into dream
, in which he can imagine Suggestion
a dream
achieveing
a target she/he think it is impossible before he searched the internet to find out how to the to gain with effort
achieving
technology
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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