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It is important to give children the opportunity to continue independently and make decisions at an early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Living in the 21st century has made it imperative for children to be given the
liberty
 to live freely and make life choices at an early age. From my perspective, I partly agree due to the following reasons that will be discussed in
this
 essay.
Firstly
,
this
liberty
 offers them the opportunity to build a pool of experience from which they can draw from in later years to solve future problems.
For instance
, when children are allowed to go into business ventures on their own and even if, they eventually fail th
ey gain v
Accept comma addition
fail, they
aluable experience which can be used in the future thereby making them better equipped for the future. The experiences become a form of currency that they are able to amass early by virtue of the
liberty
 they were offered at an early age.
Secondly
, children that are allowed to make life changing decisions on their own on term
s
Suggestion
in
of career choices, have a better chance of living happier lives as they tend to follow their passion when given the
liberty
. In doing so, they derive more happiness as opposed to children for whom decisions are made for.
This
 in turn leads to job satisfaction which transcends to a happy individual.
Conversely
, some argue that allowing children
this
liberty
 leads to an increase in rascality.
Furthermore
, they argue that social vices
also
 increases among children that enjoy
this
liberty
. While I partly agree with
this
 claim, I strongly believe that the freedom offered to
this
 childre
n should
Suggestion
child
 be accompanied by some form of overwat
ch to pre
vent these vices. In summary, I beleive
that c
accept as true; take to be true
believe
hildren should be given the
liberty
 to live freely and make life choices at an early age only if there is some form off gui
dan
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
ce to prevent them from engaging in social vices.
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