Nowadays, people get information through news and papers, but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have?

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Introduction

Currently

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new broadcasts have become very easy and quick. So people get details by reporting and rag

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but for the present journalists are precarious about the honestly on the news. There are some qualities should a good columnist should have

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its

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marked by complexity and richness of detail

elaborate

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of all, opine that journalism is not easy as they have to risk their life and work hard to update their reader and viewer about different information

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so people should admit their work and confidence increase by trusting them. So

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they can

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make mistakes but these are not intentional and counting errors should be given to them.

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most of errors

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most errors

are from the owners and

media

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the media

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should not affect the

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approval

credit

of newsman.

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, recently in

delhi

a city in north central India

Delhi

, well known

newspepar

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

newspapers

published some news about

politics which

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politics, which

later on proved false

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on investigation the fault was of reader not the journalist.

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The

reporter

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report

should

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take responsibility to win the trust of followers by taking some qualities.

Firstly

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they should have proper knowledge of their field, as some people are joining media without having knowledge of

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field and the result is they

can not

cannot

success in their field.

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, they should do research about each and every news before presenting on television or newspaper. Because, everyone wants real news not breaking news.

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many research

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illustrates

media world

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the media world

a media world

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have shown that there are major difference between professional broadcaster and non professional broadcaster.

Conclusion

To conclude, recently people

believes

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believe

only those

person

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people

persons

who have correctness in their soul and media persons have it because

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they are collecting the news to do hard work and they are putting their life

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risk. So we should trust on pressman.

Jan 19, 2020

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