Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, computer usage has become a part of
everday
life even for a child. Some believe that routine found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
usage
by young children can lead to more drawbacks than benefits for them. I would completely agree Suggestion
used
to
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with
this
opinion and further
would discuss the supporting points to
my views.
To start with, many health issues are alarmingly increasing in children. Suggestion
of
This
is because they spend most time
indoors rather than outdoors, that could Suggestion
the most time
leads
to obesity. Suggestion
lead
Furthermore
, sedentary lifestyle leads to more chronic disease like hypertension, diabetes. For instance
, latest New York study shows that 85 percent of adolescent suffering from obesity spend more than 2 hours a day on computer
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the computer
a computer
Therefore
, we are inviting young to chronic diseases by giving them freedom to used unlimited access.
Secondly
, new generation
is becoming more unemployed and lonely. Suggestion
a new generation
the new generation
This
is due to easy accessibility to internet
that they tend to become inclined computers rather than studying. Suggestion
the internet
Furthermore
, more time wasting is done on games, music or online videos. Furthermore
, they are living in more virtual world
than in Suggestion
a more virtual world
actual world
and becoming familiar with other fellow mates. Suggestion
the actual world
For example
, based on Oxford survey, in
1980s every adolescent would have 4 or 5 good Suggestion
on
friend
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friend, however
however
in 2000s this
rate has decreased to 1 or 2 friends only. These could also
lead to more incidence
of depression and suicidal tendency among them.
To conclude, everyday usage of computers could not only lead to health issues like obesity, hypertension, Suggestion
more incidents
diabetes etc
, but Accept comma addition
diabetes, etc.
diabetes etc.
also
increasing rate
of unemployment, depression and suicides in new generation. Suggestion
the increasing rate
Hence
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