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In many countries, young children are looked after during the day while their parents go to work. In a sense, they are raised by guardians and not their biological parents. What is your opinion of this family arrangement?

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Now a
days
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day
 at many places Parents appoint a nanny to look after their children as both have to leave for
work
 and cannot spend the morning hours with the young once. In my opinion, I agree
in
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with
this
 family arrangement.
Firstly
, Now a days people due to
high
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higher
 education and other expenses both the parents have to
work
 so that they can live a good life. Due to which they are not able to spend the
day time
the time after sunrise and before sunset while it is light outside
daytime
 with children. It is preferred to keep a nanny, as she can take
care
 of
child
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children
a child
 and look after him/her in
absence
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the absence
 of parents.
This
help
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helps
 in managing the
work
 as well as handling the young once in
better way
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a better way
. As they are more experienced in handling children. There are even other
options
Accept comma addition
options, for
for example
 Day
care
 where children are kept and the guardians take
care
 of them, play different games which develops their minds, even they look after the food and well-being of kids.
Secondly
,
This
 helps parents to
work
 and feel
bit
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a bit
 relaxed as children will not feel isolated and left out. As in
absence
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the absence
 of parents there is someone who takes
care
 of them and is always available. As it is required that there should be someone who can be after them and be with them when parents are not available. In conclusion,
Its
it is
it's
It's
 fine if children are raised by guardians in absence of parents as they can be like grandma and help parents to manage their
work
 and personal life.
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