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Many developed countries now have a large number of people over the age of 65. What problem might this cause? How can the problems be solved?

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The new technology nowadays have provided us with the most incredible health care quality. For
this
 reason, the human age
have been increased
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has been increased
 dramatically, and the normal average of
population
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a population
the population
 become the 60’s and sometimes above 80’s. The dark side of
this
 phenomenon
that is
 a load on any
government
 in the health sectors and the subsidies they needed. Fortunately, many countries have solutions to avoid
such
 problems, like set saving programs for their employee. The good quality of our health programs has helped us to improve the average of people ages. A lot of
scientist
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scientists
 have found many cures for the most dangerous diseases like: Cancer,
diabetic
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diabetes
, and H1N1. Even the regular viruses like
flu
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the flu
 and normal allergies were terminal in the old days, but thanks to the new technology and the new
discovers
the act of discovering something
discoveries
; medicine and equipment, which have contained all these diseases by the early
diagnose
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diagnosis
 to the illness.
On the other hand
, the increase of
human population
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the human population
 might be
load
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loaded
 on the
government
 budget. According to
latest statistics
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the latest statistics
, one of the highest consumes in the
government
 budget can be found in the medical care and subsidies which provided to the elder people. Which influence directly on the others sectors in any country. Many developed countries have set a good solution to avoid
such
 complications of the population increase. For an example, France and The United Kingdom
have make
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have made
 a medical insurance
programs
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program
. These programs force any employee to pay an amount of money each month, to be saved later for their retirement.
Other country
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Other countries
 like the USA
has make
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has made
 an agreements with private medical insurance companies to cover the employee retirements. The new word has given us the chance to increase our age average, which is
bless
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blessed
.
As a result
, the
government
 will suffer to cover the 60’s retirement. Avoiding
this
 problem to show up many countries have put many programs.

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