In some areas of the US, a Curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors. After a particular time at night, unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this

The US has demarcated some of its areas, and implemented a curfew, which does not entertain teenagers outdoors after a specific time post-sunset unless they are in the company of an adult. In my opinion, I agree that youngsters should be accompanied by an elderly person when go out late evenings considering their safety in mind, especially for young girls and children.
To begin
with, though the safety and security of women have been taken into consideration as a high priority and necessary measures have been incorporated, the rate of assault, abduction, and rape of young girls in recent times has not reduced.
For instance
, on May 9th, 2019, a young girl who was returning home at 8 in the evening from a nearby store, was abducted and raped by a truck driver. Her condition was pronounced critical when reports were filed and she was found by the police at the assault's residence 2 days after the gruesome incident. It is
such
incidences that create fear in the minds of the elders, resulting in avoiding young girls from going out alone at
night
without their company.
Furthermore
, it is not only the young girls who are being shadowed at
night
, college-going boys who travel between stations after late-
night
jobs are
also
subjected to crime as well.
For example
, robbery and murder have increased in the lanes along the transit station. It is observed that most of the mobbed and injured are boys less than 18yrs of age. Due to
such
scenarios, school and college-going boys and girls are directed to not take shifts at
night
and if necessary, they stay in the company of a person elder to them until they get to a safe place. In conclusion, nowadays parts of the US are not safe enough for teenagers to roam around late
night
due to the increasing crime observed and it is for
this
reason, it is recommended that adults accompany the young ones when they have to go out at
night
during unavoidable circumstances.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • curfew
  • delinquent activities
  • safeguard
  • instil discipline
  • anxiety
  • hazardous
  • infringe
  • social development
  • rebellious behavior
  • strain resources
  • critical issues
  • root causes
  • teenage delinquency
  • superficial solution
  • constructive engagement
  • unintentional bias
  • profiling
  • marginalized groups
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