In some areas of the US, a Curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors. After a particular time at night, unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this

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The US has demarcated some of its areas, and implemented a curfew, which does not entertain teenagers outdoors after a specific time post-sunset unless they are in the company of an adult. In my opinion, I agree that youngsters should be accompanied by an elderly person when go out late evenings considering their safety in mind, especially for young girls and children.

To begin

with, though the safety and security of women have been taken into consideration as a high priority and necessary measures have been incorporated, the rate of assault, abduction, and rape of young girls in recent times has not reduced.

For instance

, on May 9th, 2019, a young girl who was returning home at 8 in the evening from a nearby store, was abducted and raped by a truck driver. Her condition was pronounced critical when reports were filed and she was found by the police at the assault's residence 2 days after the gruesome incident. It is

such

incidences that create fear in the minds of the elders, resulting in avoiding young girls from going out alone at

night

without their company.

Furthermore

, it is not only the young girls who are being shadowed at

night

, college-going boys who travel between stations after late-

night

jobs are

also

subjected to crime as well.

For example

, robbery and murder have increased in the lanes along the transit station. It is observed that most of the mobbed and injured are boys less than 18yrs of age. Due to

such

scenarios, school and college-going boys and girls are directed to not take shifts at

night

and if necessary, they stay in the company of a person elder to them until they get to a safe place. In conclusion, nowadays parts of the US are not safe enough for teenagers to roam around late

night

due to the increasing crime observed and it is for

this

reason, it is recommended that adults accompany the young ones when they have to go out at

night

during unavoidable circumstances.

Sun Jan 19 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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delinquent activities
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instil discipline
anxiety
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social development
rebellious behavior
strain resources
critical issues
root causes
teenage delinquency
superficial solution
constructive engagement
unintentional bias
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In some areas of the US, a Curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors. After a particular time at night, unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self-studying is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.