Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?
Obesity has become a phenomenon nowadays not only among elderly people, but
also
among children. These such
problems were not presence
in the past. Both causes and solutions for Suggestion
present
presented
this
crisis will be discussed in this
essay.
On the one hand, the main reason for such
phenomenon is junk food
, especially, when franchises such
as MacDonald’s and KFC try to target children with their advertisements. As we can see, there are meals that are made for enfants
only a very young child (birth to 1 year) who has not yet begun to walk or talk
infants
such
as happy meal that always includes a toy. Healthy meals have been replaced by fast food
meals in schools and kindergartens recently. For a prime example, the New York Times has published a recent study illustrates that about 100 millions of happy meal meals are sold in the United States only every year and this
is considered as a huge number. Therefore
, this
example has shown how fast food
meals are the main cause of obesity among enfants
.
a very young child (birth to 1 year) who has not yet begun to walk or talk
infants
On the other hand
, the most effective solution for this
disaster is the awareness of parent as if parents take the responsibilty
of feeding their children healthy the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
food
instead
of fatty food
upon their shoulders, this
number of obese children will be limited. In other words
, children need to eat a perfect meal that contains carbohydrates, proteins and vitamins. For instance
, eating meat besides
rice and salads in one meal is enough for their body
to get its requirements. Thus
, healthy body
will not be achieved without healthy food
in which all ingredients that the body
needs included.
In conclusion, enfants
will not get a normal Suggestion
the infant
infant
body
without avoiding junk food
and they will need to get a perfect nutrition to become healthier when they become adults. I recommend that the authorities raise their awareness in schools.Submitted by Hussein on
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