Some people think that paying tax is their only duty, while others believe that we have more responsibilities toward society. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
A group of individuals present the view that their sole
responsibility
is to pay taxes
, whereas
others believe that we have additional duties toward society
. I strongly agree with the latter opinion.
On the one hand, some people
justifiably argue that in order to have a better society
, we have to undertake many responsibilities. For example
, people
should be responsible for keeping their surrounding area. A vast number of people
are unaware of the consequences of damaging the environment
. Therefore
, government
should raise public awareness about the consequences of threatening the environment
. This
is also
worth mentioning that recyclable garbage should be separated from other garbage in the house. From an environmental viewpoint, social responsibility
plays a vital role in preserving the environment
. In order to protect the environment
, we should be encouraged to purchase environmentally friendly products.
On the other hand
, another group of people
claim that the government
is responsible for providing essential services such
as healthcare and public safety to its citizens. They insist that the government
have a responsibility
to implement policies and regulations to protect the environment
. However
, I do not find this
argument convincing as everyone should help the government
in the improvement and development of the country and paying taxes
is not enough. Besides
, taxes
are mainly spent on urban and welfare facilities.
To conclude
, in my view, people
's effort and responsibility
is a decisive factor in having a good society
. in order to have a better society
, we have to undertake many responsibilities. Moreover
, everyone should help the government
in the improvement and development of the country and paying taxes
is not enough.Submitted by jbl1541374 on
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