2. Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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With the development of transportation it is a trend that people enjoy tr
aveling a
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
board for their vacations.
Therefore
, some local residents suggest that it is necessary to charge higher
entrance
fees for international visitors to local attraction facilities,
such
as museums, theme parks. I personally disagree with
this
idea. 
To begin
with, different prices for international tourists to
entrance
local attraction facilities will bring ne
gative feeling f
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a negative feeling
negative feelings
or them.
For example
, the various prices listed on the
entrance
doors will make them feel like that they are discriminated.
This
negative feeling will lead to ne
gative experience p
Suggestion
a negative experience
negative experiences
sychologically.
Therefore
, they might not choose to visit again or do not recommend the place to their friends or family in the future.
Moreover
, the higher prices will lead tourists to think that they might not be welcomed by local residents.  
In addition
, it is unfair for international tourists to pay higher fee to
entrance
attractions. International tourists already contribute in many local sectors economically,
such
as spending money in
eating in restaurants,
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eating in restaurants
staying in ho
tel,
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a hotel
hotels
the hotel
purchasing many souvenirs, hiring transport vehicles, and so on. 
Moreover
, many international tourists will have their budgets before they arrange their travel plans. Extra fee might be out of their affordability. If tourists learn about that there are extra fees for attractions before the trips, they might choose other destinations with free admission to attractions.
As a result
, the tourism industry will be affected as well. In conclusion, higher
entrance
fees to local attractions for international tourists will cause negative experiences and will lose the competition among tourism industry worldwide.
Therefore
, I personally support that international visitors should pay the same fees like local residents for local attractions.
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