Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree

Many people believe that the government should take the

responsibilities

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of

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scientific

research

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rather than private

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companies

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. I completely disagree with

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view. On the one hand, I accept that scientific

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conducted by private

corporation

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corporations

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involes

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involves

some dangers. The

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primary aim of those companies is ,in most cases, just making as much money as they can to maximize their profit and margin.

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, they tend to manipulate the results of

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scientific studies regardless of disadvantages to customers and

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. To illustrate, many food enterprises are producing genetically modified food, being produced from plants and animals whose DNA has been altered through genetic

egineering

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engineering

, which may toxically affect several organs and systems of

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body.

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, I still believe that privately conducted

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should never be made illegal as it does have

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role in society. Private enterprises have always played an integral role in one country’s economy

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developing a wide range of industries.

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, in

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the medicines

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and

phamarceutical

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pharmaceutical

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industries, most

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innovations and

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breakthroughs

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, being found to cure dangerous illnesses, come from the scientists which

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hired by those companies since the state does not have enough money to afford that kind of

research

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. In my opinion, the most effective solution to solve the problem described above is imposing more severe punishments on it. In conclusion, my

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conviction

is that private companies should have the responsibilities to carry out scientific

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but

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should be under

control

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the control

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of the government.