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what graph below showa the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years

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THE SUPPLIED FIGURE ILLUSTRATION DEPICTS INFORMATION ON COMPARES THREE COMPANIES IN TERMS OF THEIR WASTE OUTPUT BETWEEN THE YEAR 2000 AND 2015. OVERALL WHAT STADS OUT FROM THE GRAPH THAT THERE WERE SIGNIFICANT CHANGES IN THE AMOUNTS OF WEST PRODUCTED BY ALL THREE COMPANIES OVER A PERIOD OF 15 YEARS. LOOKING AT THE GRAPH IT IS CLEAR THAT
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 B AND C waste OUTPUTS
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B MORE THAN 11 TONNES
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 C MORE THAN 4 TONNES
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OVER A PERIOD OF 5 YEARS. Another interesting point is that
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 c decreased sharply (between 9 and 6 tonnes
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over
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 a period of between 2005 to 2010 while
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 A rose more than 6 tonnes.
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 A had highest waste outputs 12 tonnes over a period of 5 years.
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addition, company
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 A fell between 12 to 9 tonnes over a period from 2005 to 2010

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