The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?

Animals
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Animal
rights
is most discussed
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are most discussed
and one of the highly debated topics in most of the television programs and
few magazines
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a few magazines
. With the cutting of trees and spreading of industrialization as well as society hood, animals
are
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is
on the verge of extinction, whereas most of the
species
have already been extinct or fall in the category of endangered
species
.
Thus
, to my opinion zoos are the best place for these animals, making it most fittest place for their survival by looking at the adverse conditions today. Ample amount of reasons
justify
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justifies
in order to support the idea. Below mentioned are few among
plentitudes
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the platitudes
platitudes
of a reason.
Firstly
, the environmental factor poses a great threat to the jungle
species
and other animal
species
existing on our planet. With human technology emerging as a trend, there have been a lot of dangers emerging as
well resulting
Accept comma addition
well, resulting
in global warming of our planet and indirectly affecting the
live
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lives
life
liver
livers
of these animals. In
such
a case,
zoo
is the only home for these animals where they are taken care of and treated properly with
medicinal
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medicines
medication
and other amenities required for their survival.
For instance
, animals have been moving towards cities due to humans demolishing jungles for cutting trees and spreading townships,
as a result
disturbing personal life of animals and making jungles quite small to live in for a lot of
species
, and because animals
too follow
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follow
to follow
area ownership for a particular range of land, with jungles declining other animals are forced to move out of the jungle for their survival. The adverse effects of
gloabal
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
global
warming
has
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have also resulted
also
resulted in the vaporization of lakes and rivers, the vital source of their day-to-day life,
this
enforces animals to a constrained set of living or fighting for the remains of natural sources left in the area. Thereby increasing animals death rate.
Secondly
, illegal animal trafficking
by
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of
humans in most parts of the world is resulting in extinction of
species
of tigers for skin, elephants for tusk and other
species
. In
this
scenario,
only place
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the only place
left safe for these animals is
zoo
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the zoo
, where they are guarded all the time. Not only
this
endangered
species
like panda are often provided with nanny in these
zoo
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zoos
to take care of them with all
that is
needed, and in
few years these
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a few years, these
a few years these
zoo
keepers have been able to prevent them from declining as
a
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an
endangered
species
category into a balanced animal
species
category.
Therefore
, the conclusion of
asserted
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asserting
points above is only that the
zoo
is the most secure, happy, and a healthy home for the animals, because humans have enforced environment to turn against these animals and
thus
it becomes our duty as well as
responsibility
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a responsibility
to protect them.
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