Should governments make decisions about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

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Some people are concerned whether governments should decide what the public’s
lifestyle
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should be, or should people make decisions for themselves. In my opinion, based on some lifestyles
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as taking drugs, governments need to react responsibly. When people make their own decisions, they should pay more attention to the consequences. Governments can help people in making decisions
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about
their
lifestyle
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.
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, people that sell and take drugs, often encourage younger people to follow their
lifestyle
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.
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could have a serious influence on society.
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, governments should make decisions to encourage these people changing the
lifestyle
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of others and if necessary, governments have to use laws to support and maintain their decisions. So based on
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situation, governments should make some decisions for people. No matter what decisions people make, they must think about the consequences. Without thinking decisions through, some decisions can lead to an unhealthy
lifestyle
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and can become a threat to lives.
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, smoking can cause a high rate of lung cancer, as well as those exposed to the smoke. Drink driving can lead to serious traffic accidents, as well as
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to threaten
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other people’s lives.
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, governments may never prohibit the selling of cigarettes and alcohol as a deterrent to those not making the right decision.
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, people need to make decisions on their own and they must think about the consequences of those decisions. In conclusion, in some
situations governments
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situations, governments
should make decisions, which may be based on laws for encouraging as well as informing people to change their
lifestyle
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,
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as taking drugs etc. At the same time, people should make their own decisions
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about
their
lifestyle
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and consider the consequences.

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