Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.

Creative freedom is appreciated for artists in
expression
Suggestion
expressing
express
their thoughts and innovative ideas on portraits. Some individuals believe that given a full imaginative
freedoom
the condition of being free; the power to act or speak or think without externally imposed restraints
freedom
brings great benefits
on
Suggestion
of
to
their work of arts. In my opinion, artists should have enough liberty in creativity
instead
of total freedom to release their emotions. On the one hand, artists should have the liberty to portray their original views and sentiment without worrying about confinement. It can be seen that most painters tend to utilize their oeuvres as the means of impressing their emotions and delivering meaningful messages about social issues to viewers which spread awareness among masses.
Guemica
a country on the island of Jamaica; became independent of England in 1962; much poverty; the major industry is tourism
Jamaica
,
for example
, painted by Pablo Picasso, which refers to the city bombed in the Spanist Civil War depicts the
honors
a university degree with honors
honours
of war and releasing the nationalism,
as a result
, has come to be an anti-war symbol and a reminder of
tragedies
Suggestion
the tragedies
of war.
Thus
, with creative liberty, they can produce a masterpiece for use or can provide
means
Suggestion
a means
to expose the issues around us.
On the other hand
, there is no denied that works of art have significant impacts on society. Any oeuvres have
highly subjective point
Suggestion
a highly subjective point
of view,
therefore
, it is straightforward that it is able to raise a sense of tensions and violence in the public’s mind that provoke serious social conflicts or even war.
For example
, on the one of the most well-known
portrait
Suggestion
portraits
of Pablo Picasso about
femail
an animal that produces gametes (ova) that can be fertilized by male gametes (spermatozoa)
female
sexuality that seen as outrageous and
obsence
the state of being absent
absence
by several individuals has negative effects in world art. Some of the arts could hurt the communal or sentiments of the people
throughtout
all the way through
throughout
masterpice
the most outstanding work of a creative artist or craftsman
masterpiece
master-piece
in relation to religious issues. To sum up,
although
, I agree that freedom is required to create pieces of art which could be appreciated by all the countries,
authority
Suggestion
the authority
is
also
required to create artists responsible for the multicultural group. Reply
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • creativity
  • freedom of expression
  • innovative
  • ethical considerations
  • societal morals
  • unregulated
  • provoke thought
  • controversy
  • government regulation
  • censorship
  • diverse perspectives
  • artistic expression
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