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Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose which one is a better way of action according to you

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Many students prefer to study everyday with proper
plan
 while some students only work hard before the exams. There are certain benefits and drawbacks of both these approaches as per the capability of
student's mind
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a student's mind
the student's mind
.
This
 essay will discuss on both these views.
Firstly
, students who follow regular schedule and study
plan
 daily, feel less pressure at the
exam
time
. As they completed entire syllabus with proper
plan
Suggestion
planning
, they do not require extra efforts at
exam
time
.
Hence
, they can keep their mind fresh and can perform well
compare
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compared
 to other students.
However
, it may
also
 possible
that if student
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if that student
 do not revise the
exam
 syllabus at the
time
 of
exam
then
 he can
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
 marks.
Therefore
, regular study
plan
 is a better approach for students who have strong mind power. On the other side, students who start preparation before the
exam
 days have
better idea
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a better idea
 of
exam syllabus
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the exam syllabus
 as they have recently completed it. So it helps them to perform well in the exams. Students who have
stamina
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the stamina
 to work hard can follow
this
 approach to get better marks in the
exam
.
However
, sometimes many students feel pressure of
exam
 as they have not prepared for it in advance and in
this
 environment they can not focus on their studies and poorly perform
in
Suggestion
on
 the exams. In conclusion, both these
approach
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approaches
 have advantages and disadvantages and they
also
 depend on
student's ability
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the student's ability
. As per my opinion, students should prepare daily for the
exam
 to avoid huge pressure of
exam
 at
exam
time
.
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