in many countries new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. some people believe it is important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there what is your opinion ? give reasons and examples

the
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The
demand for new residential paces is boosting nowadays.
inspite
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In spite
Inspite
the fact that there is no space for construction in cities, many people are still
againt
in contact with
against
building in the
countyside
rural regions
countryside
.
in
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In
my opinion,
construcion
the act of constructing something
construction
in the
countryside
is the suitable solution for
this
problem
.
Accept space
.
increasing
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Increasing
population leave no space for building
besides
rate of immigration from rural areas to cities is increasing today.
people
Suggestion
People
leave the
countryside
in order to find better
jobes
the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money
jobs
with reasonable salaries in cities which contribute to decrease
space
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the space
available for in cities
.
Accept space
.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
definitely agree that it is
oue
of or belonging to us
our
responsability
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to protect the
countryside
because it is the source of fresh food and fresh
air but
Accept comma addition
air, but
we can construct in uncultivated areas of it by preparing a plan for building and banning destroying any trees cultivated areas
.
Accept space
.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, building in the
countryside
will be a chance
for
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of
transfering
transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferring
all facilities and modern technology that
are
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is
available in cities.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
,
this
will attract eyes to the rural areas and many businessmen will start
business there
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a business, there
a business there
such
as opening restaurant and
shoppong
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
malls
,
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,
this
step will provide job
opportinities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
for people in the
countryside
.
Accept space
.
to
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To
ensure that
construcion
the act of constructing something
construction
companies will not destroy rural areas
,
Accept space
,
the government can impose a supervision and fines on those companies
.
Accept space
.
in
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In
Egypt
,
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,
there is an expansion in building in the rural places
.
Accept space
.
for
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For
instance,
construcion
the act of constructing something
construction
in the delta region has increased in the previous years
.
Accept space
.
to
Suggestion
To
conclude,
although
protectiong
shielding (or designed to shield) against harm or discomfort
protecting
the
countryside
is very
essentail
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
,
Accept space
,
increasing population in
citios
the piece of land on which something is located (or is to be located)
sites
suits
are
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is
a big problem we face presently
sothat
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so that
building in the
countryside
will
releave
provide physical relief, as from pain
relieve
traffic congestion in cities as well as improving the standard of living for people there
.
Accept space
.

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