Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#people #museums #art #galleries #objects #works #computer

Computer

and

Information

technology are two major innovations through which we can access any

information

in any form. It is often said that

public museum

Suggestion

the public museum

public museums

and

art

exhibits will not be entertained as many of the historical monuments and their history of

art

can be seen by the use of

computer

Suggestion

computers

a computer

the computer

.The 3D configuration which helps out in viewing

the the

definite article

the

all sides of any historical place

Accept space

musuem

a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value

museum

Accept space

art

gallery.But I personally disagree with the notion because

computer

Suggestion

computers

a computer

can never replace the needs the of

museum

Suggestion

the museum

as well as

art gallery

Suggestion

art galleries

an art gallery

First

of all

Accept space

the view of some of the historical places which we admire or feel, it could never be satisfied

Suggestion

with

computer

Accept space

as museums are famous for their preserving of historical things and

also

the sculptures are carved very meaningfully which has a history

behing

further back than; at the back of; at the far side of

behind

some

Suggestion

Some

of the portrait which is kept

also

describes

Suggestion

describing

the meaning of it.

However

Accept space

these all feel cannot be given by

computer

because we can see

it but

Accept comma addition

it, but

we cannot touch or get

involve

Suggestion

involved

in it.

Secondly

Accept space

some of the objects and articles used by kings were preserved to spread

knlowedge

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

about it.If

museum

Suggestion

the museum

museums

were not exist

Accept comma addition

were not to exist, then

were not to exist then

then

how the online

information

about that could be provided.Many online resources are being

provided but

Accept comma addition

provided, but

visiting it practically gives better satisfaction

Accept space

Nowadays major

Accept comma addition

Nowadays, major

innovations are made using many applications to view

the the

definite article

the

objects or the place.

For instance

Accept space

software named CAD which has the feature of rotating the

articel

nonfictional prose forming an independent part of a publication

article

in all degrees and

also

can show what kind of material it is made and many

information

Accept space

though these all

upgradation

can be

temproray

not permanent; not lasting

temporary

excitment

the feeling of lively and cheerful joy

excitement

but when it is enjoyed

Accept space

examined and understood by observing them personally gives full happiness.School children will admire the

historiacal

of or relating to the study of history

historical

places when they would view it and

also

gain knowledge by listening to the stories narrated and become enthusiasm. In conclusion

Accept space

online representation provides more

information

about

it but

Accept comma addition

it, but

it becomes unrealistic that they would replace the original

art

and

musuem

a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value

museum

Wed Jan 22 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
37Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

321 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

virtual
digital
online
accessibility
inclusivity
cultural heritage
physical experience
immersion
local tourism
economy

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
Which of the following factors is the most important when deciding to get a job? Choose one of the options below and provide specific reasons or examples. Location The opportunity to learn various work skills The possibility of a long-term career: Có khả năng làm việc lâu dài
Nobody can deny that the most important when deciding to get a job includes many factors such as: location, the opportunity to learn various work skills, and the possibility of a long–term career. In my opinion, that depends on which stage which I am in in my career. I will discuss with specific reasons and examples below.
4.5
band
A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advise In your letter: • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. •describe some possible disadvantages. •say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Hello my friend.How are you I think you are so good because I hear your plan this summer from your sister. You will go to the camping.I guess this correct decision due to this year is very hardly and any problem. You should go to camping for chill out. I guess you worth it like this camping holiday I guess you worth it. Considering, you always hard work on your job. In addition you have focus on your job.
6.5
band
Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university. Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business.
There is some view that people trust the individuals who graduated with the education have the length of knowledge more than others who self-study. I partially agree with this statement because there are many learning resources nowadays.
6.5
band
Living in a country where you have to speak a foreing language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Each year, a lot of people migrate to other countries for several reasons. Although there are many opportunities for these individuals, I agree to some extent that sometimes many people are faced with major social and practical problems.
<4
band
There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. •describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • say what happened the last times you complained • explain what you want the manager to do.
I am writing to complain about the changing room in the sports center and its customer service. I often use this sports center. Reason I said that is, this sports center has swimming pools, football stadiums, gyms and many more. But the problem I am experiencing is the changing rooms ventilation system. You may think that it can not be that big problem, but after you trained for more than a hour or two, bodies temperature gets hot and as the result of that some kind of smells starts to come out from your body. Because of rooms air gets dirty fast staying in there for at least a minute is going to get impossible. Not only ventilation system, but also customer service is also unacceptable. Because I have complained about changing rooms for days and they did not respond to me once. Mistakes happens in our daily life but this one is kind of hard to accept. I would be thankful if you fix the problems that I wrote down. I look forward to receiving a resolution to my problem.

Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

Which of the following factors is the most important when deciding to get a job? Choose one of the options below and provide specific reasons or examples. Location The opportunity to learn various work skills The possibility of a long-term career: Có khả năng làm việc lâu dài

Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university. Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreing language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. •describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • say what happened the last times you complained • explain what you want the manager to do.