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Some people believe that only teachers should not assess students as students should be allowed to do that as well. According to their view, schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#people #teachers #students #schools #support
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The main aim of
school
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the school
 is to give us
good education
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a good education
, and some people think that evaluation of teachers by their students can help improve a quality of
educational system
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the educational system
educational systems
an educational system
. But, in my opinion, the teachers graduated Universities, got a degree and they should be assessed by experts, not amateurs. On the one hand, people believe that feedback from student can help teachers to understand better their students and their needs and how to improve their educational process.
Secondly
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, they think it will give a feeling of meaning
to
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for
 students and what they can influence of their own training process.
This
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 can
also
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 help administration to understand atmosphere in the school, promote the best teachers, and, create better professional collective.
On the other hand
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, I think that young people cannot evaluate correctly their teachers and can be prejudiced, because their assessment will be based more on their personal relationship with
teacher
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a teacher
the teacher
teachers
, teacher’s character and keenness on
subject
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the subject
, than professional abilities. From my experience, I had a teacher who was really excellent and gave a lot of knowledge that helped me to get into the university, but at the same time she was a little strict, and some my classmates did not like her for that. To sum up, I guess that professional abilities of teachers
should be assess
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should assess
 by only other professional people with big experience. And the questionnaires are good to get students’ opinions and wishes about school appliances, general educational process and programs, but not for decision about promotion and punishment of teacher.

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