All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is a general perception that
government
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the government
should bear costs of all
kind
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kinds
of
education
for all citizens of the country including primary, secondary and tertiary. I partially agree with the above mentioned
idealogy
an orientation that characterizes the thinking of a group or nation
ideology
and briefly describe both sides of the concept; One side of the aspect is that, it is the right of the citizens to get sufficient
education
services
on
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in
for
primary and secondary level to play a positive role in the society. Governing authorities regularly collect taxes from the people and
this
revenue should be utilised for the prosperity of countrymen specially in terms of quality
education
provision which is
consiedred
carefully weighed
considered
conceded
as the basic right of the public.
On the other hand
it is
beleived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
believes
that
education
is just one of the priorities, other priorities include health, infra-
strcture
a thing constructed; a complex entity constructed of many parts
structure
, security and law enforcement. Importance of
education
is
undebateable but
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unbeatable, but
unbeatable but
indisputable but
other
servicies
performance of duties or provision of space and equipment helpful to others
services
of governmental
institues
that which is perceived or known or inferred to have its own distinct existence (living or nonliving)
entities
are
also
necessary and need
allocation
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an allocation
of budget. If a numerous amount of
budget
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the budget
is spent recklessly on all
kind
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kinds
of free
education
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education, then
then
how would a required budget will be
availble
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
for the rest of the department for ideal governance?
Therefore it
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Therefore, it
can be concluded that, in my
opinion it
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opinion, it
is the responsibility of the government to ensure
availablility
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
of quality
education
for primary and secondary
level whereas
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level, whereas
tertiary or advanced level
education
should be paid by the citizens because
government
Suggestion
the government
has to focus on
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
aspect of the governance too.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • socioeconomic background
  • meritocracy
  • social equity
  • highly-skilled workforce
  • economic growth
  • financial strain
  • budget allocation
  • overcrowded classrooms
  • educational materials
  • specialized fields
  • tuition costs
  • oversaturation
  • degree holders
  • job opportunities
  • graduate unemployment
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