Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals: during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Most of the
society
has ignored to understand the
significance
of the cultural way of celebrations we used to have. Almost everyone in the recent past
tend
Suggestion
tends
to usually consider it as a holiday and spending their time to do
usual stuff
Suggestion
the usual stuff, for
the usual stuff for
for example
, watching movies or any other way of non-traditional entertainment. In
this
essay, I'll discuss about my opinion as to how it's affecting the downfall of the culture. Cultural celebrations were almost dominated by the technology. Earlier days, most of these celebrations were spent
with family together
Suggestion
together with family
. It helped improve bonding in the family and
also
people cared about
eachother
Suggestion
each other
. A celebration usually meant to be celebrated as a family. But rather we rarely see that happening in the recent past.
Real entertainment
Suggestion
The real entertainment
is when you celebrate the festival how it's supposed to be done. The time you don't understand the
significance
of it, it proves that we aren't moving in the correct path. If we take an example of Christmas, on that particular day people should celebrate by gifting their friends and families. Attending church and doing prayers is the main
significance
of
this
particular
celebrations but
Suggestion
celebration, but
celebration but
we rarely see that happening.
Eventhough
Suggestion
Even though
it's a collective festival, most of the
society
tend
Suggestion
tends
to celebrate it individually and few even
don't celebrate
Suggestion
doesn't celebrate
at all.
This
is not a recommended change we could expect in the
society
. Most of
this
kind of
society
needs to be educated on
this
and need to learn how to enjoy collectively. In my opinion, people should learn to understand the
significance
of a cultural celebration. How they need to celebrate and what they need to do as well. It's the responsibility of the parents to educate and follow the culture to
flowrish
grow vigorously
flourish
the knowledge for future generations too.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Commercialization
  • Globalization
  • Cultural dilution
  • Traditional values
  • Secularization
  • Festivity
  • Heritage
  • Individualism vs. collectivism
  • Consumer culture
  • Intangible cultural heritage
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