Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good but others believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's fast moving world,
air
transportation
is a boon to mankind. The things that used to take much longer
time
by other mode of
transportation
can be done in radically less
time
consumption
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consuming
because of
airplanes
. Not only in terms of travelling, import and export market has been positively
affected especially
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affected, especially
for the goods that are not naturally available in different regions of the world. In
this
essay, I'll throw light on positive and not-so-positive impact of the phenomenon. Use of
air
transport for import or export of fruit and vegetables to other countries is
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
as it is faster and less
time
-consuming.
This
further
aids food market where the non-available fruits/vegetables are majorly used as raw materials, if stock out of more demand of products does not
last
long, it can be delivered within
time
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the time
. Apart from
this
, globalization along with different domains of life has surely taken a mingling effect on
cuisines
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the cuisines
of countries too. So even if some harvest is not native of a country, people now-a-days like to try new and different things. While there are a lot
good
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better
aspects of
airplanes
an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets
aeroplane
, it
also
comes with heavy duties and tax. And usage of
air
transportation
for not so expensive fruits and vegetables ultimately results in soaring high prices sometimes. Expensive goods are
therefore
in some ways not adding much to
economy
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the economy
or lifestyle of people. As it is said that everything has some positives and negatives associated with it, so do
airplanes
. It depends on the requirement and urgency and financial capability of
user
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the user
users
in
this
case. According to me,
air
transportation
for import and export is a positive aspect as it ultimately cuts down extra delivery
time
and
also
enhances globalization at
faster pace
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a faster pace
.

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