The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between mother and father. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

A wise man once said: “raising children is the most difficult job in the world”. Because of

that people

Accept comma addition

that, people

are

devided

separated into parts or pieces

divided

decided

who should be more responsible about children and their growth mother or father. In

this

essay we will discuss

both

opinion and answer

this

debate. On one hand, some people argue that the mother should take a the majority share in taking care of the

childern

a young person of either sex

children

. Their merit is based on the fact that

moms

have a natural tendency to be more caring and loving. A recent study conducted by the university of Rome found that

famillies

a social unit living together

families

with a non working

mom

informal term for a mother

mum

, who are

main sponsor

Suggestion

the main sponsor

main sponsors

of the children have a happier life, and the sons/daughters are growing healthier and have a better scores at school.

Moreover

, it was found that mothers in

such

famillies

a social unit living together

families

are less

stressfull

extremely irritating to the nerves

stressful

and more productive.

On the other hand

, It is believed that without the equal

cooporation

joint operation or action

cooperation

separation

of

both

parents, children won’t grow up in a balanced way. The new active life we are living in requires a new types of

famillies

a social unit living together

families

where

both

man and woman are having jobs,

thus leading to to

Suggestion

thus leading to

the

nesscesity

the condition of being essential or indispensable

necessity

of splitting

responsibilites

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibilities

between the two. In a survey completed three years ago, 73% of the working mothers said that they can’t handle bringing up the

childern

a young person of either sex

children

without the help of their spouses, while over 80% of the questioned men believed that their equal

contrbution

the part played by a person in bringing about a result

contributions

contribution

at home made a

poistive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

impact

in

Suggestion

on

their children. To conclude, I agree with the

second

argument, The rapid life of the modern

socities

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

societies

requires the efforts of

both

parents in taking take and bringing up children,

otherwise

one partner would be negatively

effected

acted upon; influenced

affected

by handling all of parenting jobs.