Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments to do address these problems? What can individual people do?

People
in
Suggestion
on
our planet do a lot of harm to the environment, and
this
is the main problem of modern society.
This
essay will discuss how the damage is caused, as well as the actions the Government and individuals can take to protect our world. The
first
biggest problem is that, humans use nonrenewable resources without stopping and it can lead to big disasters
such
as global warming, air pollution, famine and deforestation. It is clear that now people
can not
can not
cannot
live without these
resources but
Accept comma addition
resources, but
they must save these sources. Humans should use renewable energy
such
as wind power, wave power, solar power and try to drive more efficient cars. What can the government do to prevent
this
? The government may impose tighter controls on companies that use natural resources frantically or do not dispose of waste efficiently. The
second
most global environmental cause is the extinction of rare animals and
also
Global warming is the main cause of extinction of animals.
For example
, Australia’s continuing bushfire crisis has taken an enormous toll on wildlife, with huge numbers of mammals, birds, reptiles, insects and other species killed. Аnd now many people are trying to help animals, and I think that
this
is in vain since we have already ruined our environment. The government should take any measures to stop
this
fire. In conclusion, I want to say that, Everyone protect our planet and prevent everything
that is
happening now since the consequences can be disastrous

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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