Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter- Suggest how you could help in her home- home layout, done degree in interior design, garden maintenance, cooking Say why you would like to do this work-social cause, love connecting new people, new ideas Explain when you will and will not be available-weekdays busy not possible, weekends will be there 10am to 5pm

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Dear Mrs Barrett , My name is Preet , I am living in the same building apartment where you stay. I am writing
this
letter in response to the advertisement that you posted on the online site Instagram for the part-time assistance that you need for next summer. I came across it and found myself capable of helping you out with a task which is difficult for you to manage. I am working as a personal support worker by helping the elderly in long-term care. I assist them in cooking , and physical activities and
also
have a hobby to do gardening. I always find an opportunity to socialise with different age groups of people and learn valuable things from them. I believe we will have a great time together as I am friendly in nature and can help you with cooking the Italian food that you mentioned in your advertisement as I have done an Italian cooking course because I love to eat that too .
However
as I am working during weekdays , I can favour you during the weekends from 10:00am to 7:00pm the best that suits for you. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely , Gurpreet
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coherence cohesion
Consider rephrasing some sentences for smoother transitions. For example, instead of 'I came across it and found myself capable of helping you out with a task which is difficult for you to manage,' you could say 'I came across your advertisement and believe I am well-suited to assist you with tasks you may find challenging to manage.'
coherence cohesion
Proofread for minor grammatical and punctuation errors. For instance, 'Hope to hear from you soon' could be 'I hope to hear from you soon.'
task achievement
The letter covers all the required points clearly and provides a comprehensive response to the task.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriate and friendly, which suits the purpose of making a good impression for the job application.
coherence cohesion
The opening and closing of the letter are well-executed, making it feel complete and polished.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interior design
  • layout
  • garden maintenance
  • landscaping
  • culinary courses
  • new ideas
  • social cause
  • community contribution
  • availability
  • commitment
  • weekdays
  • weekends
  • flexible hours
  • schedule
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