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Some people believe zoos, where wild animals are kept in a man-made environment, should no longer exist in the twenty century. Do you agree or disagree?

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Zoos have been a part of our human history;
however
, lots of people opine that wild animals and pets should not k
ept
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keep
in c
age.
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a cage
 In my perspective, zoological gardens have enormous benefits in societies.
To begin
, zoos have c
onsiderable role
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a considerable role
in e
ducation
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educating
educate
educates
children and families about different type of animals who could not see them in w
ild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
such
 as carnivores and predator animals. In education, zoos offer some type of animals to schools to make p
resentation.
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presentations
a presentation
the presentation
For instance
, Giza Zoo receives every Sunday three thousand students from different provinces to gain their knowledge about animals.
Hence
, zoos give opportunities to everyone to see and learn about animals share the planet.
In addition
, there are many animals approached to e
xtinct
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extinction
because of several reasons. D
eforestation which
Accept comma addition
Deforestation, which
force animals to e
migrant
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emigrate
emigrated
to a
nother
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
places, that they cannot live because of weather.
Moreover
, hunters who catch rare animals to extract organs
such
 as fur or ivory; f
ore
appropriate to; intended for
for
example, the people of Ivory Coast greatly contributed to the extinction of e
lephant.
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elephants
the elephant
an elephant
Thus
, zoos consider a safer place for animals from abolished. To conclude, e
arly decades
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the early decades
of the
last
 century zoos stand as s
afe place
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a safe place
for rare and pet animals.
Additionally
, it has been a place for families and children to learn them something new about these c
reature
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creatures
that they could not see on television
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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