Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you changed your previous job describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Dear Tom

I’m

just writing to let you know I quit my old job and found something new. I was really fed up with being a brain surgeon because it wasn’t really much of a challenge anymore. You know me; if

I’m

not learning new tricks, I get bored too easily and have to find something new.

I’m

now teaching English as a foreign language in Vietnam and it suits me down to the ground. I teach two adult classes and a kindergarten class, which is not only challenging but

also

rewarding too. Can you believe it? I

also

have some other amazing news-

I’m

getting married. She was one of my

first

ever students and I guess it was love at

first

sight for both of us. Make sure you keep the

first

weekend in July free, so you can come and celebrate with us. Keep in touch Chris

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you changed your previous job describe your new job tell him/her your other news

The Closing

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