Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

How people communicate these days has been modified by the improvements of technology. The ability to make relationships has not only broaden, but
also
become immediate all over the world. In
this
essay I will approach how these have
changed the birth of
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changed with the birth of
new relationships and explain why they have turned into a negative development. One noticeable change, is seen in couples, these days, many meet through online dating platforms choosing between many options.
For instance
, a woman can choose from many men and change immediately to another one afterwards if the
first
one
did not turned
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did not turn
out the way expected. In spite these benefits, many lie about their personality or look in these platforms.
For example
, some put a picture of someone else, and when it is time to meet face to face they cancel the meeting. Another important modification has happened in learning institutions, these offer many online classes and distant courses. In
this
manner, students meet their teachers through emails or conference calls but do not attend classes on campus,
therefore
, the learning process is faster.
This
is not always advantageous as a real
meetings
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meeting
with experienced professors have been lost and these are required to really acquire and assess knowledge. In the case of film editing, real life encounters are needed to demonstrate how much
knowledge it
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knowledge, it
has been acquired through experience and practise. In conclusion, whereas
evolution
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the evolution
of technology has made dating easier and quicker, it has worsen truthful and meaningful relationships between couples. Regarding academic relationships, in spite it is all instantaneous and at
distance
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a distance
, students need someone to guide them through practical contents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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