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Some universities now offer their courses on the internet so that people can study online. Is this positive or negative development?

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The Internet is increasingly becoming popular day by day. It is stated that, nowadays, certain universities provide their courses related to concerned subjects on online. I personally believe, online courses have many positive aspects.
However
,
this
also
 has some negative aspects.
This
 essay will explain,
firstly
, benefits of online
education
 and,
secondly
, problems associated with it before reaching a conclusion. Due to technological innovation, it has become much easier for universities offer
education
 on the internet. There are numerous benefits related to
this
.
Firstly
, it is now easily accessible to grant a higher level of knowledge through the internet, which saves a lot of money.
For example
, people from poor backgrounds cannot afford for higher
education
, so for them it is very beneficial. Another merit, is people can learn different lessons from different tutors and, whenever they prefer.
Finally
, it intensifies their typing speed rather than writing with a copy, which is very useful in today's world. There are comparatively few drawbacks related to online courses.
First
 of all, it shortens the bonding with colleagues and, others.
For instance
, young people depending on internet for educational information does not get out anymore from the room, which eventually mitigate their relationships and, interactions with friends and, remain isolated all the time. In conclusion, In my opinion, online course is a positive development which offers a huge benefit to the people,
although
 it comprises a few disadvantages. In fact, online
education
 will bring even more advantages to the people with the passage of time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distance learning
  • Flexible schedule
  • Virtual classroom
  • Digital resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Asynchronous learning
  • Synchronous learning
  • Cost-effective
  • Self-paced study
  • Technical difficulties
  • Blended learning
  • Online modules
  • Remote access
  • Student engagement
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