Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by its external appearance. Use specific details and reasons to support your answer.

Beauty
lies within the
person
and not outside” is a well-known phrase. It has a deeper meaning that
need
Suggestion
needs
understanding from a broader perspective. Some people if asked would say that they judge a
person
by his or her external
appearance
tells a lot about a
person
. Whereas others believe in judging a
person
based on his or her internal characteristics. As far as I am concerned, I would place my belief in the latter option and I hold the following reasons in its support.
Firstly
, it’s important to consider that we scarcely get any idea about a
person
based on his peripheral
appearance
. So, it’s almost impossible to comment about a
person
true
nature
or
character
. A
person
is better known by his
character
,
nature
and the deeds he performs.
For example
, Gandhi
ji
refers to the speaker or writer
I
only wore cotton clothes, which is the cheapest fabric, and looked very ordinary. But he has made a mark in the world by his virtues that he believed in
such
as non - violence. He is a renowned personality because he fought a war with
British
Suggestion
the British
to bring India independence in a non- violent way. To quote another example, I have a friend she doesn’t dress very well, looks very shabby. She is not very appealing externally.
However
, she is the topper of our school the most intelligent girl and has won many accolades.
Hence
it is quite evident we cannot judge a
person
based on their external
appearance
.
Secondly
, a
person
should rest more significance to internal
beauty
rather than external
beauty
. By knowing someone closely a
person
can better understand the true
nature
of a
person
. A
person
is better to be judged by their
nature
because it is a better indicator of a someone’s personality.
Lotus
Suggestion
The lotus
is the most beautiful flower in the
world but
Accept comma addition
world, but
it is born in the puddle. To quote an example, a
person
who doesn’t possess virtues like honesty, helpfulness, truthfulness is not a man of good moral, despite being endowed with
beauty
.
Hence
a
person
’s
character
builds his personality and
character
, not the outside
beauty
and
appearance
. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that external
appearance
is only an indicator of outside
beauty
. If one truly wants to Judge a
person
’s
character
,
then
he or she should look for the qualities that one possesses.
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