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Children now adays spend a great deal of time watching television, however, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool which is why children are less well- educated today to what extend do you agree or disagree.

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In
this
 century the birth of
different kind
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a different kind
 of technologies
become
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becomes
 efficient and necessity to humans in every
days
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day
day's
 life, television
in particular
are now use
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are now used
 as a tool for
education
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education, however
however
 in the long run children spend more
time
 in watching
tv program
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tv programs
the tv program
 than reading a book as regards to
this
 some people believe that watching
TV
 cannot replace the book as a learning tool. I completely agree
to
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with
 the statement that
TV
 cannot replace the books and
this
 essay will argue why. The use of different kinds of learning tool
such
 as
TV
, Internet and other computer devices are now embrace into
this
time
 because it is more attractive and enjoyable specially to the young people
however
 children who spend more
time
 watching television than reading books can be in a minor risk because
TV
 are far more addictive and less accurate than reading books,
this
 is why children nowadays becoming less educated because
TV
 program provides limited information and less accurate than those in books example to
this
 is a historical movies often mislead the viewer because in movies the director and scrip writer alters historical content. Books focuses on
specific topic
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a specific topic
specific topics
the specific topic
 while in television are sponsored by an organization, advertisement runs at regular intervals
between the programs the
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between the programs
 people watch. In the case of books, advertisements are very rare and
thus
 there are limited distractions on learning a subject,
in addition
 pages
on
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of
 books can turn over if any doubt arises. In conclusion, books have more edge than in
tv
 program and
thus
 it provides deeper concentration on the subjects that and better
time
 management.

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