Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In these modern times
progress
of a country above all is measured in term of its GDP and its Defense
capabilities. A higher GDP translates to a strong (military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
economy
, which in turn corresponds to a higher standard of living for its populace. Thus in
my opinion prioritizing economic Accept comma addition
Thus, in
progress
by a nations
Suggestion
nation's
government
is a justifiable endeavor
to a certain extent.
In a capitalist society financial gain is the prime motive of any activity. a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavour
Metaphorically
in our society the prospect financial Suggestion
Metaphors
Metaphor
upliftment
is the fuel the drives every activity. This
is only possible in a strong and healthy economy
. A strong and progressing economy
is vital to a nations
Suggestion
nation's
progress
. A promising economy
attracts various foreign direct investments and various other investments that help a nation
to sustain and develop itself. Economic progress
can also
be translated as the ability of a country to provide various benefits to its populace and it is also
a proof of its productivity
and use of its resources. A strong Suggestion
production
economy
is also
a very effective tool for a nation
in international diplomacy. In recent years it
has been observed the lapse in economic Accept comma addition
years, it
progress
can have a detrimental effect on the nation
’s progress
. This
was evident in 2008’s financial crisis and the following recession that was declared the financial disaster of the decade. Hence
it behooves
a be appropriate or necessary
behoves
nation
’s government
to think about its economic progress
.
On the other side economic progress
devoid of progress
in cultural, scientific and numerous other fronts is
hollow in its nature. It governments duty to preserve and uplift various regional cultures and its ancestral occupation. Sacrificing local handicraft for economic gain is not justifiable. Lacking governments support Suggestion
are
such
art and cultural heritage will be extinct in a matter of years. More over
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Moreover, government
Moreover government
government
must also
encourage scientific progress
in the nation
. Scientific advancement plays a vital role in nation’s
Suggestion
the nation’s progress
progress
.
Therefore
, it is evident that a nations
Suggestion
nation's
government
must prioritize its economic progress
, it must also
give due attention other aspect of its national progress
. In my opinion economic progress
fuels the progress
various other field
in a country. Suggestion
fields
Moreover
Accept comma addition
Moreover, progress
progress
in other
field any of various alternatives; some other
another
make
a Suggestion
makes
nation
a haven for investor thus
boosting the economy
. Thus
making it a cycling
process where advancement of one field fuels the advancement of the other.Suggestion
cyclical
cyclic
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