In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large number of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Giving speech has been the main conventional method of teaching, especially when the number of audiences is a lot. But, some individuals are considering that it should be gradually vanished in the advantage of a modern way of learning. I believe we are not able to halt
this
traditional method,
although
we can improve it to the
next
level.
First
of all, by a
bandon
Suggestion
abandoning
lectures in academic places
such
as universities and schools, we devastate the interaction between classmates and tutors and it can lead to a decline in learning quality and other learning disorders. Secondary, without that, scholars lose their sense of competition. And
finally
, other methods of learning
such
as distance learnings are not appropriate for lots of practical fields needing experience and work in practice
such
as Doctors, Engineering and some job like plumbers, electricians, etc. Because they have to work in action, online learning and
such
approaches are only suitable for theoretical syllabus and not for some more demands occupations.
On the other hand
, taking advantage of the modern era, make us communicate easily and make the most of it in advantage of decreasing the cost of education by e
liminate
Suggestion
eliminating
physical classes and lectures and replace them with distance-learning.
Moreover
, a vast majority of individuals, who are living in remote areas
such
as mountainous areas cannot be taught unless on the internet ground,
in other words
, they have not been accessed to educational infrastructures like universities or colleges. So conventional w
ays
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ways, such
such
as lectures may not be suitable for all. In conclusion, I believe,
although
other unconventional ways of teaching have lots of benefits and sometimes outweigh traditional ways, but still have their h
indsight so
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hindsight, so
I think a combination of lecture and distance-learning will be the best opt.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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