You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor. a. Introduce yourself b. Describe your plans for the party --DELETED LINK-- c. Invite your neighbor to come

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Dear neighbour, My name is Shabnam and

am your new neighbour. 2 Weeks ago,

moved i

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into

this

area to flat 30 with my family. My profession is an accountant and

also

work in a big company in my profession. As you know we moved here newly

that is

why we do not have any acquaintance,

therefore

we decided to plan a

party

. In

this

way we able to gather all our family, friends and neighbours which i

s given

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have given

give

are giving

us an opportunity to meet with each other and introduce ourselves.

That is

why

nvite

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invites

you to our

party

and

hope you will join it. For

this

party

decided to prepare some of the international food

such

as Asian, Turkish or Russian food as well as

able to cook some of varies. And we will provide all kinds of drinks and for the entertainment, we think to include some kind of music or game

also

am looking forward to seeing you at our

party

if you are unable to join please let me know.

hope during

this

party

time music will not disturb you, if so

want to apologize for that. Yours sincerely Y. Shabnam

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor. a. Introduce yourself b. Describe your plans for the party --DELETED LINK-- c. Invite your neighbor to come

Fully explain your ideas

Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth and resources among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizen themselves?

With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.

Fast-paced modern lifestyles have led to people eating more and more fast food at the expense of more traditional meals. Do the advantages of eating more fast food outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, internet based courses have become a popular alternative to university based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others, however argue that it is important to stay at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.