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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor. a. Introduce yourself b. Describe your plans for the party --DELETED LINK-- c. Invite your neighbor to come

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Dear neighbour, My name is Shabnam and
l
 am your new neighbour. 2 Weeks ago,
l
 moved i
n
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into
this
 area to flat 30 with my family. My profession is an accountant and
also
l
 work in a big company in my profession. As you know we moved here newly
that is
 why we do not have any acquaintance,
therefore
 we decided to plan a
party
. In
this
 way we able to gather all our family, friends and neighbours which i
s given
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have given
give
are giving
us an opportunity to meet with each other and introduce ourselves.
That is
 why
l
 i
nvite
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invites
you to our
party
 and
l
 hope you will join it. For
this
party
l
 decided to prepare some of the international food
such
 as Asian, Turkish or Russian food as well as
l
 able to cook some of varies. And we will provide all kinds of drinks and for the entertainment, we think to include some kind of music or game
also
.
L
 am looking forward to seeing you at our
party
 if you are unable to join please let me know.
L
 hope during
this
party
 time music will not disturb you, if so
l
 want to apologize for that. Yours sincerely Y. Shabnam
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