Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

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best
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an evil situation
the evil situation
like an unsatisfied job,
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these types
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a plethora
plethora
of problems in their lives.i
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is better if they determine to solve
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this kind
these kinds
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in
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more efforts while my colleagues sat at home and was facing that problem.O
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At
In
the
time
of results I saw a huge difference  between Marks obtained by me and them.i
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it's
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pleasure
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opinion
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by doing nothing.It has many reasons,
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an example in
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era of globalisation,
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the majority
of people doing their current jobs without keeping any interest in them,
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the competition
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be run
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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