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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,Describe the situation Explain your problem and why is it difficult to work Say the kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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complaint
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 about the difficulty I am facing during my stay at the Dental hostel in room number 12 which I am presently sharing with my roommate. Since my home is far away from the college, I had to shift to here, so that I can save time on travelling and concentrate on my studies.
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, since the arrival of my new roommate, my stay here has become extremely difficult.  In spite of
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 requesting her to not play loud music, she does not listen.
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, her friends visit our house and they talk loudly for hours, due to which I cannot concentrate on my studies.
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, she keeps the lights on until the late hours because of which I am unable to sleep well.
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 has affected my overall performance at work. I would like to request you to change my accommodation and give me another room, which I do not have to share with anyone, as it is my final term. I would
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 request you to kindly address
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 matter of priority. Awaiting your response at the earliest

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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