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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? people should only those books that about real events real people and start MS fact use specific reasons and detail to support your opinion

#people #books #events #ms #fact #detail #support
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These days, reading is the best way to improve knowledge and
overcomer
win a victory over
overcome
 issues. It is considered by some that people need to read only true
books whthatre
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books, whether
books whether
 based on real events, the real story of people, and facts of the establishment.
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, I totally disagree with
this
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 opinion and believe that individuals can read the story, self- improvement and business books.
First
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 of all, I believe that people should read real stories and improving self books because these books are
important
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more important
 rather than fact-based books.
In other words
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, in
this
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 contemporary world, lots of people are busier in their lifestyles so there is no one left to people to guide them that how to improve themselves.
As a result
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, they have to read from books that what are the exercises play a role to be healthy as well as a routine schedule. To illustrate, nowadays millions of people have been reading storybooks
such
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 as harry potter, which helps them to get relieve stress and make them relaxed. For these reasons, I think that story and self-motivation books are essential
instead
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 of fact relevant books.
Secondly
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, growing competition in the
market books
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market, books
 about businesses has become prominent around the world in which individuals would achieve business ideas along with experts'' experience. So, having an owner of the company, and even
ae
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 be helped to being a future well-known businessman.
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, researchers have proven that reading business books uphold people to
impimproveTherefore
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, business-related books are vital for people. To conclude, fiction and self-improvement books have
being
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
 significantly crucial. In my opinion, people would become more aware of the current generation by reading these books than the old
facts
Suggestion
fact
 book.
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