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Nowadays people believe that governments should invest tax payers money in healthcare, others believe that money should be use in other areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is becoming a controversial issue that in which
sector governments
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sector, governments
 should invest
money
. Some people suggest that governments must pay attention
on
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in
health
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the health sector
sector
, while some of considered others
sector
. There are arguments on both sides
on
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of
this
 very topical debate and I will discuss them now. On one side,
healthcare section
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the health care section
health care section
 is most pivotal for a
country
 because sometimes a
country
 how developed it depends on how much improved their
health
sector
. Spending
money
 on
health
sector
 could bring a healthier and happier society, so bureaucrats should emphasis on it.
For example
, those people, who cannot afford to pay
doctors fee
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the doctors fee
a doctors fee
, their charge must be free, on that case and authorities provide some free medicines and treatments to relive their economical pressure.
On the other hand
, it cannot be denied the importance of others
sector
 like education and transportation. There have
also
 arguments to support
this
 view. A
country
 need to ameliorate others infrastructure in order to turn into a developed
country
. So distributing
taxpayers
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taxpayers'
money
 to improve other public facilities is
also
 valuable for
citizen
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citizens
the citizen
.
For instance
, education
sector
 should have received similar funds because there are so many children, those who are not capable to pay their school fee, which should not be ignored by
bureaucrats
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the bureaucrats
. They have right to get basic needs form authorities. To sum up, though
health
sector
 is the paramount area in a
nation but
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nation, but
 others faculty have similar importance, so authorities should take strategy to spend
money
 in order to make debate among people about
this
 phenomenon.

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