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Nowadays, most people are nog as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions

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In the modern world, many people do not keep an active
lifestyle
 as they used to do in the past.
This
 is because of the technology and shortage of sports facilities.
This
 essay will show possible solutions to
this
 problem. The main reason of not doing exercise is people have become addicted to the gadgets like mobile phones, tablets, laptops. They over use them, keep the sedentary
lifestyle
 which leads to obesity, laziness or other diseases.
For example
, we can often see Many young and adult people playing computer games in play stations
instead
 of having time outside. Another reason of not getting fit is a lack of sports facilities. Many gyms cost money and people do not want to spend their salary on it thinking that it is not so significant. They do not take it seriously.
Consequently
, citizens suffer from health problems.
Thus
, it makes us clear the main cause of
this
 issue. Some possible solutions are undertaken to tackle the problems.
Firstly
, the government should be involved. Local authorities have to provide citizens with free sports clubs, establish every playgrounds and yards with sports equipments. By doing
this
, we can attract and interest people to do sport.
Secondly
, propaganda about healthy nation should be spread among the population. All educational, working places should give lectures about the healthy
lifestyle
.
Consequently
, people will keep more active
lifestyle
. In conclusion, today people have become lazy and do not do any activities compared to the past. If we paid attention to the mentioned solutions we could prevent
this
 issue.
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