Prevention is better than cure! Researching and treating diseases is too costly so t would be better to invest in preventative measures to what extent do you agree.

The twenty-

first

century witness many advances in medicine and

treatments

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treatment

findings. Even so, many people believe that

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advancements does come at great cost, and investing in prevention methods would be a better way to deal with diseases.

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is believed

that people have is proven to be the best approach, which will be shown through the existence of the deadly and incurable diseases, and the hassle of going through the sickness and

cure

process.

Firstly

, there

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are

many diseases that cost enormous efforts and money without a

cure

to be found.

For instance

, the global health organization stated that after over a decade of research for Aids

cure

, Which caused the death of many, none

cure

could be found to

cure

it. That being said, researching is the best method doctors have, but

it

it is

it's

not guaranteed way, while preventive methods and some mindfulness from people could have cut the effect of

this

deadly virus by many

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times

the current patients.

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still could be quite a problem to go through that.

For example

, a survey done by the American health association found that people who had caught a flu or some other disease before an important meeting of a school exam, have wished if they could

had

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have

done all the Preventive method they can even if the disease is curable. From

this

we can understand the need to avoid diseases all together is much more welcomed than just taking a

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careful

. In summary, while finding a

cure

for deadly diseases is very important, investing in avoiding sickness in the

first

place is much more appreciated. Whether if it's

bad time

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a bad time

for you to get sick, or if it will alter the course of your life, prevention is always better and is a famous saying goes "a pound spent on prevention is much better than ten

pound

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pounds

spent on treatments".