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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Publicity system in current society is debatable. At Present, the approach followed by advertising companies
are
Suggestion
is
 immoral and unprincipled in the society.
This
 essay will discuss why discuss why advertising is considered amoral in present community.
To begin
 with, the fact that we cannot escape from advertising is a significant cause for complaint.
Methods
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The methods
 followed by advertising agencies is a major concern. Constant images and big hoardings in the middle of the roads
is
Suggestion
are
 absolutely intrusive and irritating at times.
For instance
, hoarding in front of school about a junk food and luring students is an unacceptable.
Although
 we expect adverts in numerous situations, it now seems that there are very few places we cannot actually avoid them. A
further
 aspect of advertising, I consider immoral is the way it encourages people to buy
prodcuts
commodities offered for sale
products
 they may, may not need or afford them. Children and young people are influenced by ads showing the latest toys, clothing or music and
this
 can provide enormous pressure on the parents to buy these products.
In addition
, the publicity of tobacco and ads related to liquor has long been a controversial issue,
However
, cigarette have only been banned in many countries. It is quite possible that the ads for alcohol will encourage excessive consumption and underage drinking, yet restrictions have not been placed on
this
 type of advertising in the same way as smoking. To conclude, several
apects
a distinct feature or element in a problem
aspects
 of advertising do appear to be morally wrong and are not acceptable in today's society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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