Some people say that in all level of education, from primary schools to universities, to much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no enough time on learning practical skills. Some say that all educational
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consumes too much time in academic learning and less time is given on hands-on experiences.
This
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essay will discuss why the
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argument is superior than the latter one. There are different levels of education which includes primary, secondary and tertiary. The main reason why it is divided into levels is to let a person's learning develop well.
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, a child is enrolled to a primary education which deals with basic
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subjects, then
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later on he will be enrolled
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in
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highschool which
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high school, which
high school which
will tackle a more complex
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he will study to a university afterwards, dealing with the most complex subject matters. Upon going up to a higher level of education, the person already has a good foundation of knowledge and learning.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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