To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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has been considered as the best innovation in
this
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modern world and we all are lucky enough to witness it.
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eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
issue
explains about how
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internet
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the internet
has changed the human
life
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and it
also
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explain to what extent it made
life
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more easier
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easier
.
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essay
also
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provides
few examples
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a few examples
and reasons to justify how
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internet
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the internet
made
life
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more
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
. While the world is moving
in
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at
on
a fast pace it is
also
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important to have a proper
communicarion
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
tool in order to pass
information
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. Communication is
the most strongest
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the strongest
tool one needs to have to
convey or
a person who conveys (carries or transmits)
conveyor
share
information
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and knowledge.
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The internet
has bought a major change in the way we communicate.
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of phone
calls people
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calls, people
are now able to talk to each other with the help of
internet
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through various different mediums.
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For
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Since
example introduction of Facebook and Whatsapp had made
life
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more easier
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easier
for people who live far from each other.
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tools
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tool
help
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helps
people to communicate
to
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with
one another easily from where ever they live. Earlier in 20 century people used to
gain
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knowledge by reading books and
articals
nonfictional prose forming an independent part of a publication
articles
. To
gain
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knowledge they need to visit
library
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the library
a library
libraries
and sometimes
its
it is
it's
difficult to find the
information
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they are looking for. Whereas in
21st century its
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the 21st century, its
the 21st century its
much
more easier
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easier
to
gain
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knowldege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
. The only thing you need to do is to search the
information
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you need and you will find ton's of website's that provides you with the right
information
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. What if you
dont
do not
don't
have a library in your town? It makes
situation
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the situation
more worse
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worse
and people get
degected
affected or marked by low spirits
dejected
digested
detected
by
this
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. But now
internet
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had
life
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more easier
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easier
easiest
as you can find the
information
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from the place you live. One
such
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example is
wikipedia
a web-based encyclopedia with content contributed by volunteers; most articles can be edited by anyone
Wikipedia
. Wikipedia provides lots of
information
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and it is said that
their
in or at that place
there
is no
such
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information
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that you can't find here.
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Hence
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Hence, internet
internet
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is a strong
information
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provider as well.
Although
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their
in or at that place
there
are many factors of
internet
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which made
life
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more easier
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easier
to
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for
mankind but
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mankind, but
these two above mentioned factors play an important role in mankind. Communication tools made people to share
information
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from various parts of the world while
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information tools
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information, tools
helped to
gain
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more
knowldege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
irrespective of where they live and what they do.
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evolution
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the evolution
of
internet
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had made
life
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more easier
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easier
and
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
to mankind.

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