Some people become famous at an early age. Is it bad or good? Discuss and give your opinion.

It is understandable why people consider taxes as

burden

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a burden

.

This

is due to the fact that these are significant deduction from their earnings. And because these are

also

hard-earned monies from working, people believe they should keep these

instead

for their daily living expenses. While most of these

tax

deductions have

material impact

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a material impact

on our net pay, I believe that people still need to pay taxes as

contribution

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a contribution

to the state’s continuous progress and society’s comfortable living. One argument in support of abolishing the law of mandatory paying of taxes is that most of the

government

officials tend to

otherwise

corrupt the funds

instead

of allocating it to certain projects that would benefit the nation.

For example

, in

third

world countries, graft and corruption are so rampant that every

government

position is being seized, not for the intention of public service but only for these officials’ own interest. People see that the reason of every

projects

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project

implemented by the

government

were being overly funded by which most of the part of the budget are only being corrupted,

instead

of fully using it for the completion of a certain project.

Consequently

, witnessing the results of these kind of anomaly are evidently unjust for the people paying taxes.

However

, there are more convincing arguments in

favor

promote over another

favour

of people’s obligation to pay the taxes according to their capability. That’s why there are

tax

laws & regulation by which the taxes are deducted based on the worker’s income bracket. Having said the unresolved corruption the

government

has, projects involving public transportation, health, education, agriculture and commerce are certainly still needed for the survival of the community and of the whole nation. To fund these projects, most portion

are coming

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is coming

from worker’s

tax

contribution which are significant for the completion, especially if a country have no sufficient income sources like oil & gas in the Middle-east. If the budget would be

lessen

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lessened

because of not obliging people to pay

tax

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taxes

, the society would likely suffer and living would be inconvenient for the majority. In conclusion, even though many are reluctant to lose some of their money due to

,

Accept space

,

I still consider that we still benefit on these as

well

Accept comma addition

well, although

although

we cannot feel the impact directly on us and we need to pay taxes.

Additionally

, living comfortably & peacefully in a community

can somehow impliedly states

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can somehow impliedly state

that these are

results

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the results

of the taxes we have paid.